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A meeting at a graveyard

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Post  Kaylaruana Thu Dec 11, 2008 3:25 pm

Kaylaruana turned her horse. A nod to the Commander and off she went. She was not to happy do. It was cold up here and she had the feeling something was about. The place looked like a nightmare. She turned to the graveyard. Clearing the way the Commander had called it. Well better get to work.
Some time later Kaylaruana is tired. There seems to be no end to the undead. However, for now it seems like she can take a brake. She puts down her axe and grabs a drink. Then she hears a growl behind her and something pusses her over. She grabs her axe and turns around. Only to see a chain shoot right by her, crapping the skeleton and pulling him away behind a tomb. She quickly runs after it. As she turns the corner, she stops.
A stranger is standing over the remains off the skeleton. The strains thing however is his sword and eyes. They glow. Suddenly she remembers the meeting. How here brothers and sisters were arguing about them.
The stranger looks over. “Paladin, are you not a bit young to walk her alone? Not to long ago I would have killed you. Do not worry. I am on your side now.”
Kaylaruana looks the stranger over. He looks weird. Like a paladin yet he is not. Alive yet he is not.
“You would have died trying Dead Knight and what side would that be? How says I can trust you?”
The Dead Knight looks irritated. “The king him self made me a member of his kingdom. Said I was to be trusted. You dear question that?”
Kaylaruana thinks this over. “I don’t now much on kings and those kinds of things. However, I do now what my brothers said. You are undead. You are tainted.”
The Dead Knight bows his head and angrily says. “Not by choice girl. Not by choice.”
“Still you are what you are.” Kaylaruana thinks what to say next, “You might kill all the undead on this graveyard. You might even go off and kill Arthis himself. But when the day is at an end, you are still a Dead Knight!”
The Dead Knight seems to be getting angry now. Suddenly the ground turns dead at her feet. “Paladin I used to be a great hero. I died fighting for thy alliance. Now I am back to fight once more. Yet you tell me you will not trust me? You realize girl this good have happened to you?”
“No it good not I am sure of it.”
The Dead Knight looks surprised “You mad girl? Arthis takes how he wants. What makes you so sure he would not turn you?”
“I never said he would not turn me. But I do not think I would walk around like a Dead Knight for long.” She smiles, “My brothers would make sure of that.”
“Aaargh…Paladins.” Whit those words, he jumps on his black horse and rides away.
Kaylaruana looks while he goes off. Then a growl next to her makes her remember she was here to do a job.
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Post  Evangelist Thu Dec 11, 2008 5:09 pm

i really lie your story kay need one of the guys to go threw and move some fo your full stops and correct the words notrhing major i undearstood it really liked the way you brougt the morals of the order and the word of the king to its altimate contradiction but you picked the rite answear.

The order of Illumination do respect the word of the king and that is why we have not purged the streets of storm wind of there filth but trusting them for there past is a week ness of man and we no this week ness and will not fall victim to it again most deathnights were victims of the Lich king and had very little choice in his plans adn they would argue who can contend with the will of the Lich king.
i for one agree they cant so if he wishes to controll them again there is no garantee he will not and so a true herow of old who has seen first hand what destruction he can do at the hands of the Lich king who ask for exection not to try and attone for his failings.
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Post  Macloren Tue Dec 16, 2008 12:51 pm

Nice Kayla, I like the interaction between the two characters. the DK is all like 'but were all cool now, the King says so' and the Paladin's all 'um... not exactly'

on a side note, I did the DK quest chane on the Hord side recently, Thrall is such a hippy! I hate him!
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Post  Arill Tue Jan 06, 2009 10:34 am

The story is nice and I really enjoyed it. Nice indeed
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